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School Uniforms?!?!??!?!?!?!?!?

18 Jan 2017 21:24 | Author: User1491673841 | Category: Literature review on 360 degree apprisal

1. The first stage in writing is producing ideas. It’s important to dedicate two or three minutes to carefully planning what you are going to say. Make a list of the points for and against. Remember that the key to writing a good balanced essay is to include as many arguments you disagree with as those you agree with. They should be noted impartially although in your conclusion you can say why you find one side more convincing than the other.

Once this is done you can focus on expression. This means looking at sentence structure, tense usage and vocabulary. It’s important to write clearly and economically. This can mean either rephrasing ideas in two sentences instead of one, or rewriting two longer sentences as one shorter sentence. So, go over your first draft, looking for ways of improving sentence structure, tense usage and vocabulary.

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    Викуся Буцкевич 18 Jan 2017 00:08

    Pros: Students are safer (from drugs, weapons, fights, etc). Parents can be put at ease that their children are taken care of. Schools may see a rise in enrollment because student enrollment may increase (because parents feel their children are safer), and in return they will receive more grant money from the state. This could also attract better teachers, which would also boost grades for students. Cons: Students may distrust the teachers and not feel like they can open up to them. If the school is particularly safe, having a cop may cost the school a lot of money and not create a "real" benefit.