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The five-paragraph essay Getting started means getting organized. A good place to start if you are inexperienced in writing.
As an English teacher, I often have students with the same problems as yours. I suggest you try eliminating unnecessary words from your sentences. See http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/572/02/ If you re worried about the essay becoming too short due to these eliminations, then replace words that add detail to your essay. For example: Vague and wordy: The protagonist feels he has a lot of issues to worry about. Concise and detailed: Lancelot struggled with his loyalty to King Arthur as he was drawn to Guinevere. Do you see how the first sentence says nothing, but the second illustrates the details.? Good luck. I hope this helps.
"being ashamed of our president of the United States is from Texas," unless you are quoting directly, I would put, "being ashamed that the president of the United States is from Texas" or " ashamed our President of the United States is from Texas"
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