I may be wrong, but I wanted some clarification. I was taught in college that the thesis statement always have to be the last sentence in the introductory paragraph. Yours does not follow that rule. So as long as a thesis in somewhere in the intro, it is okay? I am trying to teach my HS son to write an essay.
Hi! As an English teacher teaching “O” Level in an international school in KL, Malaysia, I would have to say that your info has been very comprehensive, useful and user-friendly! I’m certainly going to use them and hand them out as worksheets to my year 11 students. Thank you very much and God bless.